I concur with everything this flash stands for
:D :D :D
That is all
You've got a brilliant idea here with the WHOOKOS set but I feel as if it needs some refining. The brilliant thing here is the idea of what school would be like if you could handle bullies like that, if you could skip class like that and if you could have been as awesome like that. But it's the execution that I felt that let you down.
1) The voice acting needed some extra LIFE in it. Thats not to say it aint good, it just needs to be more exciting like (please excuse me) Rina Chan or even Egoraptor. If you could get the voices right then it would be well on the way to being brilliant
2) Next is the storyline. It was a good concept but felt like it trudged along whining "do we HAVE TO" . Don't make me feel like I have to force myself to watch the whole thing.
Okay that was the bad. NOW TO THE GOOD!
1) The jokes were well done and were well refined. I actually lol'd many times. Instead of the "hur dur DICK ASS" kind of jokes of many other artists, you passed these on your 'joke motorbike' screaming FUCK YOU and then throwing several witty remarks from an air cannon bought from a shady character across the road.
2) Good animation. 'Nuff said
WELL DONE. Lets see if the next few are even better that this one!
It was great UNTIL you made the poop joke. couldn't you have made him grow pubic hair or something equally disgusting instead of poop? so yes. good
on your comment...
you say your glorious vision can never come to pass. BUT! IT DID in a way :P shattered kevin rudd :D well done on a fantastic animation!
the only reason that this was funny was Herbert from family guy. before that the animation just seemed to draaaaaaaag on for a while. Especially with the red bull. you could have made jessi go super hyper instead of ruining a couch. Its one of those "meh, could be better" things in a flash. 5/5 for animation, 3/5 for sound quality (i know you're getting a new mic) and 2/5 for execution of flash. now i sound like a school teacher
for that sheer statement...
i give you a 3.32 (note to self: stop stating the friggen obvious joke thta every other person on newgrounds has done.
The moral of the story?
always wear a seatbelt
it was ok
I found that I was interested in the storyline cause being in yr 10 (I hope to god that yr 10 is the equivalent to junior high here in australia otherwise I've probably screwed myself) I face the problem of fights at school. I also found that rat has an anime version of my hairstyle :3 The animation needs some work, as does the voices but overall good job
nice storyline. of course... its not the best animation i've seen but it was good. and i haven't seen a good animation in a while. Well done.
It had some fantastic elements: loved the bubbles rising.
the overall execution of the flash.
so well done! be proud of yourself.
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